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Since I'm going to be at a CE all day tomorrow (have to maintain my RPh, even though I've had jack and shit in the way of work in over a YEAR), I thought I'd get some revisions in today, because I just had the one scene left from Atesh's POV. And I finished it.
+319, 81,486, 61 days left. Two POV characters' arcs left to revise. One month for each.
I don't know whether the 5-year-old is realistic in this scene (she's Azar's daughter, and Atesh's, uh, 1st cousin once removed? or something), because kids are Not My Thing. She's curious and asks questions that aren't exactly polite. I'd rather not post the excerpt in question because SPOILERS. I don't recall my first reader having any comments on that, so it may be fine. I'll ask whoever my next round of readers are to let me know on that part, I guess.
+319, 81,486, 61 days left. Two POV characters' arcs left to revise. One month for each.
I don't know whether the 5-year-old is realistic in this scene (she's Azar's daughter, and Atesh's, uh, 1st cousin once removed? or something), because kids are Not My Thing. She's curious and asks questions that aren't exactly polite. I'd rather not post the excerpt in question because SPOILERS. I don't recall my first reader having any comments on that, so it may be fine. I'll ask whoever my next round of readers are to let me know on that part, I guess.
