I've gotten to the part of the novel where shit starts happening and I don't need significant structure repairs or continuity fixes. I don't think, anyway.
I definitely need more descriptions, as![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
anthimeria pointed out when she read the draft. I also need more exposition, maybe. Don't know. I need to find about 30,000 words to add. Some will be descriptions, sure, but I many have to add a few more scenes (in addition to the ones I made Scrivener documents for already).
Current word count: 73380.
I definitely need more descriptions, as
anthimeria pointed out when she read the draft. I also need more exposition, maybe. Don't know. I need to find about 30,000 words to add. Some will be descriptions, sure, but I many have to add a few more scenes (in addition to the ones I made Scrivener documents for already).Current word count: 73380.
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Date: 2011-02-26 06:23 pm (UTC)From:I could probably add some expository scenes with more characterization, though I'll finish the next round of revisions (with the senses added in) and get folks to read it and let me know what needs more explanation.