It looks good! I would maybe personalize it a little more, so people'll understand you're AWESOME and'll want to snap you up :P (Personally I'd put Hertha on there just to show you're not, like, a Bayern fan eh he he. Also, US-American Hertha fan is adding to the mystique.)
But then again, well, I'm not a Zweck-WG Mensch so the sober approach might work better for that purpose.
I'm so bad at personalization! I could also say I'm an SF writer. I thought about including Hertha (because I definitely don't want them to think I'm just some Bayern or BVB Erfolgsfan or something), but I also worried about what if they've got some hatred of Hertha? Football, man. That's important.
I *would* like to get this sorted sooner than later, but as long as I get my plane tickets before they get stupid expensive, I'll be fine. And if they say I have to pay for the whole month or whatever, I'm ok with that as long as it's less than I'd pay for a hotel (under 400€). I'd prefer to pay pro-rated, of course, but.
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Date: 2013-10-31 05:05 pm (UTC)From:But then again, well, I'm not a Zweck-WG Mensch so the sober approach might work better for that purpose.
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Date: 2013-10-31 05:16 pm (UTC)From:I *would* like to get this sorted sooner than later, but as long as I get my plane tickets before they get stupid expensive, I'll be fine. And if they say I have to pay for the whole month or whatever, I'm ok with that as long as it's less than I'd pay for a hotel (under 400€). I'd prefer to pay pro-rated, of course, but.