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Continued work on same scene from yesterday. It's a long scene. Trying to keep it from being all infodump, which is hard.
Though I have the same information being told THREE TIMES in subsequent scenes. Though each time, it gets cut down in the interests of what the grunts need to know.
I don't know if these scenes will all survive intact in the final version. This is just major revision number 1, after all.
Though I have the same information being told THREE TIMES in subsequent scenes. Though each time, it gets cut down in the interests of what the grunts need to know.
I don't know if these scenes will all survive intact in the final version. This is just major revision number 1, after all.
