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I took the printout of "Valkyrie One" to the coffee shop today to work on revisions. Despite some damn loud chatty people in the shop, I managed to finish it in just under 2 hours. I've typed the revisions into Scrivener, and the word count stands at 3951.
I'm looking for a couple betas. (If I had a regular writing group, this would be less problematic. *sigh*) I need more along the lines of a whole reading, for plot holes, characterization, pacing, etc, than a line edit, though pointing out awkward or repetitive wording is always welcome.
Turn-around by August 1 preferred, since the close of submissions is September 1.
(Now to work on the proposal/query...)
I'm looking for a couple betas. (If I had a regular writing group, this would be less problematic. *sigh*) I need more along the lines of a whole reading, for plot holes, characterization, pacing, etc, than a line edit, though pointing out awkward or repetitive wording is always welcome.
Turn-around by August 1 preferred, since the close of submissions is September 1.
(Now to work on the proposal/query...)
