I can't say as I have anything resembling a cohesive draft right now; on the pre-revision read, I found a ton of 'this is stupid' and 'this sucks' and 'if I did this instead, it would be more interesting,' and I haven't gotten that far in the revising process. So there are holes where I have things like "pirates attack the ship, causing further dilemma."

Of course, I finally got back some notes on Valkyrie One, and she wants revisions of the ending. (She doesn't like the pacing and thinks the final scene is unnecessary and wants me to move that bit into the scene where they stop the terrorist. I'm not sure I agree with this assessment. I'll make a separate entry on it, though.)

The novel is set about 8 years after V1, and a few of the same people show up.