revise, revise

[feuervogel]

I took the printout of "Valkyrie One" to the coffee shop today to work on revisions. Despite some damn loud chatty people in the shop, I managed to finish it in just under 2 hours. I've typed the revisions into Scrivener, and the word count stands at 3951.

I'm looking for a couple betas. (If I had a regular writing group, this would be less problematic. *sigh*) I need more along the lines of a whole reading, for plot holes, characterization, pacing, etc, than a line edit, though pointing out awkward or repetitive wording is always welcome.

Turn-around by August 1 preferred, since the close of submissions is September 1.

(Now to work on the proposal/query...)

Comments

[anthimeria]

.doc is preferable--I can use track changes!--but .rtf and .odt are also workable.

[feuervogel]

.doc it is! (Though the most recent versions of Open Office support track changes as well. Buried in a menu somewhere.)