I'm sure I'll need a line edit eventually :D I just don't want anyone to expend the effort on this early a draft, you know? Because a line edit is a LOT of work. (I'm also better at nitpicky stuff, so I need someone to look over my shoulder and say, "you know, this doesn't make sense. Why's he doing X instead of Y?")

I got two bites over on DW, and another friend said he'd read it (as a consumer of space opera with mercenaries in). And the guy who's been helping me out with the military stuff said he'd look it over, but he didn't promise not to flake. So I'm still in the market for a reader or two.