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feuervogel) wrote2009-11-17 02:55 pm
feuervogel) wrote2009-11-17 02:55 pm
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Progress is shiny.
Today's word count: 1735
Total word count: 21045
Distance to goal: 23.4%
There are a lot of things I know I need to go back and fill in. Like, oh, descriptions, and what people are doing in between dialogue bits. Probably a bit of exposition, as well. And a couple scenes that could flesh out the characters a bit.
I need to make an outline-y thing for the upcoming space battle and run it past the ex-army dude (and possibly the folks at![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
military_beta) for a logic check. My head is kinda swimming at the moment, so it's not going to happen today. Maybe tomorrow, or Thursday. I'll need that to move forward, and I have little to no logistics or tactics training.
Total word count: 21045
Distance to goal: 23.4%
There are a lot of things I know I need to go back and fill in. Like, oh, descriptions, and what people are doing in between dialogue bits. Probably a bit of exposition, as well. And a couple scenes that could flesh out the characters a bit.
I need to make an outline-y thing for the upcoming space battle and run it past the ex-army dude (and possibly the folks at
military_beta) for a logic check. My head is kinda swimming at the moment, so it's not going to happen today. Maybe tomorrow, or Thursday. I'll need that to move forward, and I have little to no logistics or tactics training.